Hmm, I am noticing that the books from my sub-genre, that I am using as guides to answers about writing questions, spend a lot more time in the MC’s heads, on the environment around them, and in conversation than I am. I used to do more of what they are doing but it got pushed out of me by the writer’s group that I belong to. Words like boring come to mind. And maybe my writing just wasn’t good enough.
I have to admit freely that my writer’s group has helped me immensely in many many ways. This is one area that I am going to have to regroup on and make sure that the writing is well done. I can see a lot of work ahead of me. Get back to it and make it better and richer.